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Sep 10

1:48 am

【詞曲創作】想牽妳的手

米式藍調我要回應

詞/曲: 白米格

我　思緒失控　無法形容　我心中　妳影子反反覆覆掠過　那種感受
想　陪妳永久　只怕妳笑　我不懂　回憶裡全都是妳　you’re beautiful

沒有妳的夜晚　no no no no　想念擁抱妳的那份溫暖
星光即使燦爛　na na na na na　星星有伴卻也還是孤單

I’m sorry　傷害了妳　不只一次而已而如今
我只想可以　讓我親口說給你聽
Ｓo sorry　深愛著妳　妳的溫柔我無法忘記
妳是否願意　再一次讓我牽著妳

妳　是否知道　擁擠街道　人群中　有個我想牽妳的手卻　一個人走
我　已不想逃　想給妳擁抱　想擁有　那幸福心動感受　unforgettable

沒有妳的夜晚　lonely lonely night　想念擁抱妳的那份溫暖
星光即使燦爛　starry starry night　星星有伴卻也還是孤單

I’m sorry　傷害了妳　不只一次而已而如今
我只想可以　讓我親口說給你聽
Ｓo sorry　深愛著妳　妳的溫柔我無法忘記
妳是否願意　再一次讓我牽著妳

妳　是否知道　擁擠街道　人群中　有個我想牽妳的手卻　一個人走

想念著　天使般的妳

Demo:-

老唱機版Demo:-

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“【詞曲創作】想牽妳的手”有7則回應

Lin Wei 說:
September 10th, 2007 at 8:00 pm
Dude the demo one is more clear~ you should have sent me that one. then I wouldn’t have thought I was going deaf….well I like that one better cos it don’t sound like u’re recovering from sore throat….Hehe
But nice song~~ ^^ its nice~ haha Dunno feels it sounds a bit similar to one of david tao song….but maybe its just me. The lyrics makes it so much nicer. SEE TOLD U, need to be able to hear the lyrics….( my opinion at least, more feelings after knowing what the lyrics is) Its beautiful, but still got that touch of sadness in it.

白米格: Duh! That’s why it’s called a Retro Radio Demo. See, you can nvr hear clearly what those guys were talking about through a retro radio, wahaha~ I am not sure about DT though. He’s too high up there and I don’t think I’m anywhere close. >_< and yea, this is supposed to be a sad song. Glaaaaad you like it. ^^
Lin Wei 說:
September 11th, 2007 at 6:32 pm
erm….Hahaha do u know when u replay the retro radio demo the start sounds like aliens.
Have u watch that show astronut’s wife. The alien talking thru radio gives out that sound…..just to point it out. cos when I was trying to make out that whole JUMBLE before u post up the lyrics…..it was on repeat, the sec when the end n the beginning starts….that two sound compilation are quite nice sound compilation.

keep up more writing~ its nice to see ur product, even though onli once in a while.

白米格: Nah, haven’t watched that show. Maybe you should move to mars… teehehe~
豆子說:
September 17th, 2007 at 10:31 am
說真的…你好利害喔…可以寫歌…也有好嗓子:)
能創作感覺真好…對吧?

白米格: 謝謝^^ 說真的, 對唱歌我是101%的外行. 還真希望接受專業的歌唱訓練ㄋ. 不管任何形式的創作都是一種舒發情感和發表立場的管道吧? 妳用文字的創作也很棒啊~ 尤其是妳的插畫, 別具一格. 給彼此加油吧!^^
cynn 說:
September 19th, 2007 at 4:36 pm
这首歌终于出啦！那个海边版本呢？被海风吹走了？

白米格: 甚麼時候說過有海邊版本啊? 我倒想弄一個牙買加雷鬼版本… (噢耶~)
cynn 說:
September 20th, 2007 at 12:21 pm
你那天去散步的地方不是海边吗？用手机录下的。。。（若不是。。。那应该是在我梦里吧。。。。算了。。。demo 的确比较好听）

白米格: 哦~ 我那天錄Demo的確是在海邊啊… 可是我是在車裡所以沒有錄到海浪聲啦… Orz
von 說:
October 4th, 2007 at 1:29 am
认识你那么久，真的还没好好听过你唱歌。。。不错嘛。。自写自弹自唱。。还会偏曲。玩压声录音。有一点点陶吉吉。又有一点不RAP 的周杰伦。歌声和你说话的声音有点差别。总之，好！加油啦。相信你可能有机会大红大紫。。。啊哈哈。

白米格: 呃… 過獎啦~ 我也還沒聽過妳唱歌ㄟ… 應該很不錯吧~ 下次卡拉OK記得預我一份喔.
erin 說:
October 30th, 2007 at 11:54 am
原本不认识你，只是辗转来到这里。
这样也还不算相识，只能说是在网上萍水相逢。
听你的歌感觉还不错，只是咬字有点周杰伦 :P

最近刚刚建立起自己的BLOG，欢迎有空来我家拜访。
初次到访，请多多指教！
http://www.wretch.cc/blog/erin1038

白米格: 不好意思 >”< 這裡也荒廢得有夠久的了. 我說話也常常咬字不清啊...Orz